Oct 11, 2010

GothNo Day 11 Progress

I wrote the beginning of a love scene between Brian and Deirdre. Both their points of view were inserted with a break to indicate when the point of view character changed. I'm going to have to think about this scene in some depth when it comes time to revise and rewrite. Both their points of view are important in terms of motivation, but so far I've only been writing from the ghost's point of view so I need to even up the viewpoints a bit more so that the story settles down more easily for a reader.

Surpassed the daily wordcount goal, too. Hurray. :)